Motag's Photo Essay
Let Us Ride
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Photo Essay Planning Template
Name your page "W8 Photo Plan Code"
Read over Photo Essay Tips and your iSearch page for your research information. List the main ideas here:
Comments:
What do you hope to accomplish?
I hope that some cops will see this and they will see where we ride and stop tyring to take are bikes away for riding on the road be cause we never ride on the road unless we have to go across to get where are jumps are.
What question will your research and your photo essay answer?
I want to show everybody where we ride and what we jump in nespelem also to quite calling us in.
Write a twenty-word, focused gist statement that explains your thesis -- the message/theme of your photo essay based on the question and evidence you have found. (Do not use because).
We got alot of places to go ride and do huge jumps but we always get called in so we cant ride.
Plan 1: Organize your plan into your photo story.
Photo Description | Photo Message/Implication | Photo Text (for reader) |
http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/Sgz20UFRTBI/AAAAAAAABgw/YgZrpVVnPFw/s640/DSC03309.JPG |
The hill we jump over the top of at the sand dunes. | One of the big jumps is over the rock on the hill. |
http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/Sgz2-EJ2IgI/AAAAAAAABhE/vZVlyTGIkEo/s640/DSC03313.JPG | at the track | Theres only three jumps at the track. |
http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/ShDVII2yCNI/AAAAAAAABqE/LP7Uhju1UwQ/s640/DSC03486.JPG | this is also at the sand dunes. | The ramp is the biggest jump that we have around nespelem. |
http://lh5.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/ShDZUoECr3I/AAAAAAAABs0/96qmwEufTBA/s640/DSC03519.JPG | this is at mineral hill. | The hill in the back is mineral hill that is really steep that we try to clime. |
http://lh5.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/Sgz2m7gtvlI/AAAAAAAABgY/toMz9XW9XBY/s640/DSC03304.JPG | this is where you start to hit all the jumps. | Here you can see all of the jumps that we hit but the ramp. |
Comment:
Revise your gist statement to match your final images and story:
Plan and explain:
Photo | Text |
Grabber Image will be:http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/Sgz2-EJ2IgI/AAAAAAAABhE/vZVlyTGIkEo/s512/DSC03313.JPG | Title will be: First ride |
Thesis photo will be:http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/Sgz20UFRTBI/AAAAAAAABgw/YgZrpVVnPFw/s512/DSC03309.JPG | Thesis is: After you road here you don't ride any where Else again. See where we ride not on the roads it's all dirt. |
Plan and explain:
Photo | Text |
Last Grabber/Summarizing photo will be:http://lh3.ggpht.com/_WdsZRk187FM/ShDVFU95bXI/AAAAAAAABqA/idzDjb1B2WA/s512/DSC03485.JPG | Phrase or question to summarize or call to action will be: The last jump you will hit in nespelem and the biggest.So please stop trying to take are bikes. |
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