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Right the World for Us

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A Poetic Goal

 


 

 

This is a template page found under "templates" when you create a page.

 

Create your own page and put your page in the "Right The World" folder.

 

We will link to your poem here: Right the World for Us Poems Table of Contents


 

Could you write the world?  Could you right the world?

Here's what two people write (right) about:


 

I write the world.

 

I write about

me

my freckles

Dad's bad back.

I write about

Grandma dying.

 

I write to find out

waht makes freckles

where the sun goes at night

how birds fly without falling

I write to find out

where Grandma is now.

 

I write to make change

to stop bullying

to keep cats inside

to clean up the rivers

ta ask why--

there was no hospital bed for grandma.

 

I right the world.

 

-- Lorraine Wilson[1]


 

I write the world

 

I write about

me

my curly hair

Grandkid's growing up

I write about

Jake's crash.

 

I write to find out

what makes curly hair

why the weather changes so

how we change energy to save the world

I write about

why Jake still hurts.

 

I write to make change

to work together, everyone

to respect and encourage individual talents

to progress in a green world

to asky why--

Jake and others can't get medical treatment.

 

I right the world.

 

-- Sheri Edwards


Assignment Prompt

 

What do these people write about?

 

Who (code)

What do these poets write about?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do these people want to right?

 

Who (code)

What do these people want to right?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make a list of things you want to write about and things you want to right. 

 

Who code

I could write about:

I would like to right:

Comment/connection to others

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Use the pattern of the poem to write your own poem about how you will write (right) the world. Write them below with your code/team name and date.


 

Poems:

 

Shee

9/2/08

 

I write the world

 

I write about

me

my curly hair

Grandkid's growing up

I write about

Jake's crash.

 

I write to find out

what makes curly hair

why the weather changes so

how we change energy to save the world

I write about

why Jake still hurts.

 

I write to make change

to work together, everyone

to respect and encourage individual talents

to progress in a green world

to asky why--

Jake and others can't get medical treatment.

 

I right the world.


Name Heading 2

Date

 


 


Connected Pages:   Right the World        Right the World for Us     Making Changes


 

 

Footnotes

  1. Wilson, L. (2006). "Chapter 6: Developing Writers To Write (Right) the World." In Writing to Live: How to Teach Writing for Today's World. Heinemann: Portsmouth. p. 102

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