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8w aria13 letter to the president

Page history last edited by Ms. Edwards 15 years, 7 months ago

Dear President, 

 

What are you going to do to help the enviorment? What are you going to do about global warming? 

 

I think you should really look into this like think about all the polluting of the air, water, and earth thats going on. What about the animals that live here also? They are the ones who are paying for all the damage that we're doing. Did you know that every year there are thousands of beach closings in the US, and outdated monitoring methods may in some cases leave beachgoers vulnerable to a range of illnesses! Polluted beach water can cause rashes, ear aches, pink eye, respiratory infections, hepatitis, encephalitis, gastroenteritis, diarrhea, vomiting, and stomach aches!.  If you ask me I would not like that. Now just think of what could happen in the future? 

 

What about us if we keep driving regular cars and keep spilling all kinds of oils and gases into the ocean and even just on the road, and all the factories that are letting all the danerous and toxic gasses out. The air will be so bad that we're going to need an oxogyen tank to live. Then think about all that snow and ice melting all around us isn't good. Noah might need to build another Ark!

 

 What about the money? What do you say about how much every thing is costing? It's crazy! Take food and clothes, for instance. A pair of nice pants are just $50.00 a piece! Just 50! Now think about pants that are in style like every one wants a pair? Double the price of a pair of nice pants. And food I can get some chicken already cooked and a six pack of let's say pepsi? That costs about $11.00 - $15.00. That may not be that much, but just think it used to be like a quarter. The real problem is though what about all the people that don't have enough money to buy clothes and food? What would happen to them?

 

So Mr. President, what do you have in mind about all these problems? What are you going to do to help?

 

 

Comments (2)

Icky13 said

at 10:38 am on Sep 23, 2008

I like that she is against our problems

Ms. Edwards said

at 10:01 pm on Sep 23, 2008

Thanks for finding facts to fit your ideas.

Reread everything slowly and edit for periods, etc.

I think you will want to rewrite this part: "every year there are thousands of beach closings in the US, and outdated monitoring methods may in some cases leave beachgoers vulnerable to a range of illnesses. Polluted beach water can cause" because it doesn't sound like you saying it.

Break your ideas into paragraphs-- a paragraph for each concern, even if they are short.

Great line about the ark! Try to come up with some lines for your other concerns.

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