Owhi Lake Project
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w5 Owhi Code Template
Wiki Work Assignment:
Goal 1: Write organized and elaborated paragraphs with style and word choice. Edit the paragraphs.
Tasks for Wiki:
Rubric and Evaluation
How well did you organize your writing, with each sentence in each paragraph linked to each other with connected words or transitions words so your sentences are not simply a list of ideas?
How well did you elaborate your ideas with details to create a mind movie in your readers mind?
How well did you include strong nouns and verbs as well as specific details so your reader could picture each idea? Did you include figurative language as well as strong verbs?
Use the table below to evaluate your work:
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Choose your score. Use evidence from your paragraphs to prove your score. |
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Organization:
The paragraphs flow in a logical beginning, middle, and end. Every sentence leads to the next; it is not just a list.
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Elaboration:
Every sentence contains details so the reader does not have any questions; a mind movie plays in the reader's mind. |
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Word Choice:
Each sentence contains strong verbs and precise nouns with added detail (descriptions). Consonance, imagery, simile, or personification add to the description. |
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3 |
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Organization:
The paragraphs have a beginning, middle, and end. Most sentences lead to the next; it is not just a lis |
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Elaboration:
Most sentences contain details so the reader does not have any questions; a mind movie plays in the reader's mind most of the time.
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Word Choice:
Most sentences contain strong verbs and precise nouns with added detail (descriptions). Some consonance and imagery add to the mind movie. |
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2 |
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Organization:
Most of the time, the sentences just list ideas without connecting them or organizing them into some sense for the reader. |
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Elaboration:
Few sentences contain details; the reader asks many questions to understand the picture; only one mind movie. |
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Word Choice:
Few sentences contain strong verbs or precise nouns with little detail (descriptions). Little consonance or imagery are included. |
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1 |
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Organization:
The sentences just list ideas without connecting them or organizing them into some sense for the reader. The reader may be confused. |
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Elaboration:
Few details and few sentences; only general ideas used; the reader asks many questions to understand the picture. |
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Word Choice:
Few sentences contain strong verbs or precise nouns with little detail (descriptions). Many ordinary words are used; no surprise to interest the reader; too general -- anyone could write this. |
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